Research Paper

I feel confident about my point in the rough draft, because I feel like argue you it enough to believe it to be true. I am concerned that I am going to repeat myself, and that the paper is going to to turn boring. There are only some many points you argue with my topic and thesis, and I think that I did it over-boardingly. It was really easy developing the paper, because of all the notecards, but it was really hard on trying to reach the full four pages, and they only way I accomplished that was by repeating myself, or thats how I felt. I like to lengthen my rough draft, without feeling like I repeated myself, and have it a comfortable length. Dr.deGravelles, I would like you to focus on fluency in my paper, and make sure everything flows well.